I need an {honest} opinion please....does this sound too listy?
In addition, Bono is involved in many charitable groups. He has taken notice in Jubilee 2000, which supports third world debt relief. He has also taken part in Amnesty International which works to release political prisoners and aims to abolish the death penalty and end political killings around the world, Children of Chernobyl is an Irish charity responding to child victims of the Chernobyl Nuclear Plant disaster in 1986, and the peaceful environmental group Greenpeace. Four years ago, he formed an organization with Bill Gates called DATA which has a double meaning standing for “Debt, Aids, and Trade in Africa,” and “Democracy, Accountability, Transparency in Africa.” Bono has also lent his support to an organization called “The ONE Campaign” to make poverty history, and has over the summer met with some of the G8 leaders of different countries to figure out how to provide more money and care to the 3rd world nations. When U2 is touring, every night before the song One, Bono makes a speech about extreme poverty and how we could all sign up to the “The One Campaign.” Also, Bono and Ali started their own “Socially Conscious” clothing line called Edun. In this 90% of the cotton comes from South America and Africa. It was started to help poor nations with “trade rather than aid.”
Did I miss any big charities (sp?)
Do you think I should elaborate more?
(This is just 1 paragraph by the way, I'd post my whole essay, but I think I'd bore you to death
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