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[voxxie]

i'm just the last breath
just the aware
a past written
a lost page
an evolution
a disease
at every morning
an awake
a forgotten song
word from heart
peace of mind
disolution
sin
nothing really ends
just change

 

[Bonochick]

nothing really ends
just change

Very true.

I always enjoy reading good short pieces...it's hard to pack so much emotion and meaning into few words, and I'm impressed when people do it.

 

[LCK]

A very good poet I would say, to convey such a certain *feeling* of knowing exactly what is meant in brief verse. I quite like it.

a past written
a lost page
an evolution

is my fave part.

 

[voxxie]

thanks

 

[Soul Always]

i'm just the last breath
just the aware
a past written
a lost page
an evolution
a disease
at every morning
an awake
a forgotten song
word from heart
peace of mind
disolution
sin
nothing really ends
just change

I like it.