Don't think just type everything's just fine

[Alisaura]

It's gone it's gone
it's fucking gone
my eyes won't focus any more
within I am without it
words chase words until meaning and feeling dissolve
two sides of my brain no longer resolve
the world of my dreaming will not revolve
within me
I see the grey and the grey
a bubble of fortitude separates by
a sensible nonsense wreaks havoc without
within all is calm and grey and devout
within me without me
the schism has grown
the seeds of ideas vainly are sown
on barren ground, desert sound
winding down, and down
and
down
Without me.

 

[The Wanderer]

hi Ali, good to see you around here

it's fucking gone...

words chase words until meaning and feeling dissolve

 

[popkidu2]

I really really really like that.

There's a sense of anger and resentment and frustration there that I can relate to.

Nice.

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

Good work, I liked it.

 

[zooropamanda]

missed this one Ali
very raw and strong
i feel you always write with such feeling and from somewhere deep inside your head.

thanks matey

 

[BabyGrace]

wow Ali..you always have such powerful emotion in your poems. I like the way Manda put it. and i can so often relate to the thoughts you post, as I can here..

within I am without it
words chase words until meaning and feeling dissolve
two sides of my brain no longer resolve
the world of my dreaming will not revolve
within me

it's nice to see you around here again