dont make me think of a title

[zooropamanda]

and if I laughed would
you wonder why
and if my tears wrote your
name in the sand
would you walk on them
and if I waded out to your
torn hands
would you let me hold them still...

or perhaps this moment
will be our forever time
perhaps the reason
overcomes the rhyme
perhaps the questions will
be no longer answered
and the calling hour will
fade into a distant memory

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she knows, she knows, she knows



[This message has been edited by zooropamanda (edited 01-01-2002).]

 

[Solar Supernova]

Keep writing Amanda, for me at least, its a method of healing... im sure you knew that already...

Really I have nothing to say here, I just wanted to acknowlede your good work.

 

[ACROB@T]

and if my tears wrote your
name in the sand
would you walk on them

you have a fantastic way of pulling these gems out from somewhere..it deserves a mini title at least

 

[zooropamanda]

well come on, its your job kids, make up a title for this lil one

 

[Salome]

don't have any title suggestions, I liked it very much though

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

[This message has been edited by Salome (edited 01-05-2002).]

 

[BabyGrace]

how do you do it? everything you write, i can feel so much..

it's gorgeous Amanda, absolutely gorgeous

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In the night of death, hope sees a star and listening love can hear the rustle of a wing.
~Robert Ingersoll

 

[zooropamanda]

thanks

 

[ladywithspinninghead]

Beautiful Amanda, really...I definitely need to come to this forum more often.

 

[The Wanderer]

and if I waded out to your
torn hands
would you let me hold them still...

 

[brettig]

'will'

 

[Kieran McConville]

Alright, here's a title:

"The Tide Has Turned"