a poem

[voxxie]

believe in just a past
and the long way behind me
im tired enough to start to cry
but im still as young as the last time
and the remind of my old behavior
comes with you
and your silence glory
and the waste of time
don't ask for this
i barery deserve a word
and the hope is not by my side
by now.............

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sorry for the bad english



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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

 

[The Wanderer]

hey voxxie!

that takes a lot of courage to post your poems in another language, I've tried to write stuff in German, but my grammar is poor... yours, on the other hand, is very good!

the point is, I can understand what you mean with your words and relate to those thoughts

poetry is about expressing yourself, and you did that

 

[voxxie]

thanks for cheer me up wanderer

!
is nice that you understand it

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

 

[zooropamanda]

Yes that was really good voxxie. Made more sense than most of my poems
Share some more please

 

[bonovista]

Excellent Voxxie!

Las palabras son tan fuerte..

 

[BabyGrace]

wow voxxie! that was excellent! I really admire you for writing in another language...

and the emotion in your poem was gorgeous! you write easily as well as English speaking people

 

[travu2]

Es muy bonita! Thank you for sharing it with us.

 

[voxxie]

thanks guys

!!!
now i want to post more poetry

well one more

in a sigth of dead
in a wish of leaving
believe me
i'm not what they say before
i'm not the true
neither a the lie
but i want to lay in your head
hear your thougths
i will be here forever
at your side.......

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

[This message has been edited by voxxie (edited 05-20-2001).]

 

[The Wanderer]

but i want to lay in your head
hear your thougths

 

[jala]

it was beautiful and with such heart and sould...keep me in tune with more.