Red-Line Special Delivery

[wizard2c]

I wrote this the other day but just posting now....been down with a migraine the past few days.

Red-Line

Red-Line
special delivery
lights go out
all through the lands.

Arrow of justice
as the bow is drawn
tightly held in hand
hi-tech performance
deadly accuracy.

Red-Line
special delivery
any hour of day
prisoners in time
never to escape
as uncertainty surrounds
what there is to behold.

A strange world
where people survive
the sheerness of space
daily destinies unnoticed
as it all blends together
Red-Line
special delivery
prism defines.

A forest of glass
too few see the light
encompassing
envisioning
Red-Line
special delivery.


07-28-05

carol
wizard2c

 

[For Honor]

Everytime I read it, I get something new... I can't seem to interpret new material well at all...

I will come back and read it more times later on.

But so far, I like it

 

[wizard2c]

reply

Thank you For Honor.....it is a complex writing.....interpretation may take a while.

carol
wizard2c

 

[For Honor]

Something about justice.....

most muddling stanza
"Red-Line
special delivery
any hour of day
prisoners in time
never to escape
as uncertainty surrounds
what there is to behold"

I like the forest/prim of glass thing

But I'm still "in the dark" a little...... hmm.......