reach

[Salome]

just stumbling
towards you
while I
pronounce
your name
my love
is love
and you
reach out
and smile

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

 

[zooropamanda]

bout time you got your butt round here, Salomey...

I like the poem

 

[Salome]

well, I have been lurking around a bit
but since english isn't my first language I feel a bit out of place with all the poets around here

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

 

[zooropamanda]

Don't be silly, you are one of the wittiest people around this place, so write on poet...

 

[Salome]

thanks

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

 

[The Wanderer]

wow, I was suprised to see your name in here, you know, I've always admired your intellect Salome, now add poetry to your list of talents...

the poem itself creates a very natural and beautiful image, it's something i can see vividly in my mind's eye

 

[Salome]

I probably shouldn't respond to my own thread too much, but I just wanted to say 'thank you' Wanderer

I'm very glad you liked to poem (I should try it more often) and it's great to know you think as well of me as I do of you

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

 

[BabyGrace]

oh no don't feel out of place

beautiful poem, like Wanderer said, it's very natural...

 

[travu2]

I envy your ability to make such a great poem that's so short. I always feel like I get too wordy.

 

[bicyclingfish]

Why is it, that when I read your poem, I thought of seeing Bono walking through the hotel lobby? And when I went stumbling over the couch towards him, he smiled and said "Hey," like I was just another guy.

I love poems that bring it outta me. Thanks for sharing.

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Come on, come on! Be good to me...

 

[foray]

Salome, do you have Magnetic Poetry (tm)? Just asking.

Nice little piece there. I can imagine it would go well with innocent-looking drawings. Make an illustrated book out of it and give it to someone special

foray

 

[Salome]

to be honest, I don't know what Magnetic Poetry is

that little book for a special person already exists

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it