Alright, I would like your opinion on my work. Please be gentle with me. I am not a poet, just someone who tries to write poetry.
My Sunshine
And I just let you go
Time came to release
The moment when you walked out
The moment when I lost peace
I lost a piece
A piece of you in me
What it was we shared
And what set us free
Oh, the sunshine
My Sunshine
Nighttime
It's so very dark
It just took a second
A fraction of a moment
You left forever
I didn't know it
would be forever
Oh, the sunshine
My Sunshine
Nighttime
It's so very dark
Need the touch of a hand
A healing hand to take
Take what I have left
For God's sake,
Heal me
My Sunshine
And I just let you go
Time came to release
The moment when you walked out
The moment when I lost peace
I lost a piece
A piece of you in me
What it was we shared
And what set us free
Oh, the sunshine
My Sunshine
Nighttime
It's so very dark
It just took a second
A fraction of a moment
You left forever
I didn't know it
would be forever
Oh, the sunshine
My Sunshine
Nighttime
It's so very dark
Need the touch of a hand
A healing hand to take
Take what I have left
For God's sake,
Heal me