Another poem, I like this forum best :)

bono-vox · 11-28-2001, 12:52 PM

Time slips away like a grain of sand upon the sea,
I don't feel it pass by,
But time without you is a burden on my soul.
My heavy heart.

I feel like I'm slowly, slowly dying,
The walls you built around me are closing in,
I'm screaming,
Still nobody hears,
it's the sound of my heart calling you,
Love, You cannot see,
It comes from inside.
My heavy heart.

I wrote this in a free class at school today, its quite bad.

bono-vox · 11-28-2001, 12:54 PM

Well you can read this one too,

You told mr for a reason,
It lifted all those woes, opressing me,
You told me for a reason,
You gazed into my soul,
You told me for a reason,
It was love,

You told me for a reason?
My mistake.

Angela Harlem · 11-29-2001, 05:32 AM

Your poems are so sad, they're filled with melancholy. Not that that's a bad thing!

I like reading your stuff.

80sU2isBest · 11-29-2001, 11:25 AM

Your poems are filled with yearning...they express the soul's desire to love and be loved - and I'm not talking romance here. I'm talking the BIG love.

Nice.

11-28-2001, 12:52 PM	#1
bono-vox Rock n' Roll Doggie Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: maze of your imagination, where the streets have no name, lol Posts: 3,436 Local Time: 11:49 AM	Another poem, I like this forum best :) Time slips away like a grain of sand upon the sea, I don't feel it pass by, But time without you is a burden on my soul. My heavy heart. I feel like I'm slowly, slowly dying, The walls you built around me are closing in, I'm screaming, Still nobody hears, it's the sound of my heart calling you, Love, You cannot see, It comes from inside. My heavy heart. I wrote this in a free class at school today, its quite bad. __________________

11-28-2001, 12:54 PM	#2
bono-vox Rock n' Roll Doggie Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: maze of your imagination, where the streets have no name, lol Posts: 3,436 Local Time: 11:49 AM	Well you can read this one too, You told mr for a reason, It lifted all those woes, opressing me, You told me for a reason, You gazed into my soul, You told me for a reason, It was love, You told me for a reason? My mistake. __________________

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11-29-2001, 05:32 AM	#3
Angela Harlem Jesus Online Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: a glass castle Posts: 30,163 Local Time: 12:49 PM	Your poems are so sad, they're filled with melancholy. Not that that's a bad thing! I like reading your stuff.

11-29-2001, 11:25 AM	#4
80sU2isBest Rock n' Roll Doggie Band-aid Join Date: Nov 2000 Posts: 4,970 Local Time: 08:49 PM	Your poems are filled with yearning...they express the soul's desire to love and be loved - and I'm not talking romance here. I'm talking the BIG love. Nice.