wood

[hiphop]

my grandfather
and what i found
in a book

about land and trees
and history and changes
and Austria and Italy

while i believe that land
is no one´s property
i want it back

and i dream
what i would do
with the woods

create space
freedom
maybe for people like you

i wonder
did he like elves
they called him
modern writer
later

and i need a strategy

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All rights reserved

 

[MissMaCo]

Elizabeth Bishop ?

 

[hiphop]

I never read anything by E B -

recommend sth. Marie

miniaturist and sharp edged confessional, wiki says

 

[ZeroDude]

I like it, simplistic and effective, congratulations.

 

[wizard2c]

reply

I like it as well.......though I must say as a wizard I have a certain fondness for trees and elves.

carol
wizard2c

 

[For Honor]

 

[wizard2c]

reply

Yes....trees and elves.......in your modern Middle-Earth.........they are you cell-phone tower and the elves are the ones behind the desk.

Don't worry....most people don't read here anyway..........

carol
wizard2c