Think of what you have

[Brandon]

You only found your way
Once you where lost.
You wake up to the day
Paying the ultimate cost

Living in a place
Full of hurt and pain
Looking at a face
Shivering in the rain

Can I help these people?
They are just like me
Except,I pray at the steeple
And they pray on their knees

 

[DancingBarefoot]

Welcome

Your poem is beautiful in it's simplicity. Thanks for sharing it.

 

[bonovista]

Very nice poetry Brandon!!

Welcome to our feedback..Oh yea, I know you already..

 

[foray]

Hi, Brandon. I like your poem. I like your style. Please write/share more. Thanks.

Most sincerely,
foray

 

[zooropamanda]

Hi Brando

Glad you could make it to the best corner in town.

You remind me of how I wrote when I was the same age as you..

 

[BabyGrace]

please share more!! and don't ever have second thoughts about posting them

I'm glad we have some people coming to the forum instead of running from it for a change...

say...you said you were in NHL chat...are you a Flyers fan???

*crosses her fingers*

 

[Brandon]

Nope, a Toronto fan sorry

. I dont really watch hockey alot now anyways. Ill chat with ya later

 

[BabyGrace]

k.. don't worry and I'll beat ya into the ground for not being a Flyers fan and I'll cure your lack of hockey obsession

 

[The Wanderer]

this and the other one Brandon, very well written, i especially like the last stanza

and the other poem has such raw emotion in it...