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Old 08-01-2002, 11:13 AM   #1
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Keep breathing ( for your life)

My poems are very unconventional . Here is my latest poem.

KEEP BREATHING ( FOR YOUR LIFE)
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Keep breathing
Keep reading

You have killed a life
But its alright
You have stolen your love
But its alright

Keep breathing
Keep repeating

You can lie
You can cry
You can multiply
But keep breathing
Just keep breathing

Be ready to seize
Be ready to push
Be ready to kick
Be ready to lick
Be ready to get sick
But keep breathing

You might be stuck
You had stolen someone's luck
But keep breathing
Just keep breathing

Keep breathing
You know its important
Because if you forget
You might just die

Keep reading
Keep breathing
Keep repeating


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Old 08-01-2002, 12:45 PM   #2
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Old 08-01-2002, 02:48 PM   #3
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Old 08-01-2002, 05:51 PM   #4
 
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nice AM..always loved repetitions in music/poems..touch of Numb in there as well..
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