feeling void

[AcrobatMan]

feeling void
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manic feelings
spineless thoughts
hyperactive laziness
constructive self-destruction
useless desires
wanted expectations
so much money i sold myself
cold thoughts
such chills
such thrills

 

[LCK]

This is a really vivid poem and its brevity only adds to its power.

 

[TheGenericPoet]

"hyperactive laziness
constructive self-destruction"

You have a cool way of bending words.

 

[Bonochick]

That's one of the best things I've read in awhile...excellent!

 

[antietam]

that struck a chord, it sounds like a post-heroin-addicton piece? I am a recovering addict and if that was what you were talking about, I feel your pain. but I'm not in despair, 'cause I know that anything can be repaired. If I was wrong, don't ever try it. If you need to alter your conscious. drink booze. but not too much 'cause when too much wine goes in, not much wit comes out

 

[AcrobatMan]

thanks for liking it