GraceRyan
Rock n' Roll Doggie FOB
Aaand, Larry was about to have another go. You know, when I see it like this, it sounds like a very shitty fic.
Ha, I remembered all that. Please finish this story even if you don't like it or want to... I'm still attracted! Although Please is miles better.The cancer scare was in Adrift which sort of turned me on to Bono. MW had Gloria who was like a press agent on the 360 tour. She'd had an affair with Bono during Zoo, Larry at the end of Vertigo then wound back with Bono during 360. Wow, she kind of sounds like a slut when I write it out like that.
We could use some of that too...Elevation Bono.
GopherMacPhisto said:Awesome story. Your writing has me hook, line, and sinker.
I might suggest two songs for this segment. Had you ended it before the mother entered the waiting room, I would have cued up a song called "Baby I Lied" by Deborah Allen.
Deborah Allen - Baby I Lied (1983) - YouTube
But instead, I would end this segment with the opening bars of the overture of "Hang 'em High"
Great Western Movie Themes - YouTube