Never want to fall in love again

[Amélie]

What's the point of being dependent
What's the point of living on a cloud
What's the point of sleeping on a drug
What's the point of holding you
What's the point when it's all fake

What's the point of letting you break my heart
What's the point of letting you tear me down
What's the point of sleeping together
What's the point of holding you
What's the point when you only need yourself

What's the point of waiting for you
What's the point of caring for you
What's the point of loving you
What's the point of making love to you

What's the point...
When you never give (gave) me a chance



thx for reading!
comments are welcome

 

[For Honor]

What's the point when it's all fake

It's a tough thing to realize... I've been there


Better luck in the future

 

[wizard2c]

reply

What's the point if you never tried.....
What's the point?
Perhaps there isn't one at all.

Your writing is good, though..don't give up on love....if that is which you seek.

carol
wizard2c

 

[youtooellen]

'what's the point..'
I find it strange how I live life asking myself that question during any given situation..

great writing

but love shouldn't be given up on

 

[Amélie]

thank you so much

I'm not giving up on love, it was some kind of therapeutic writing, write things off, and it helped!!

 

[ZeroDude]

As a piece of writing I don't particularly like it (clichéd, no flow, no metaphors, it is what it is) however I'm glad it helped you come to terms with your own emotions.

That’s all I’ll say.

So I'm not a bastard.

 

[Amélie]

you're right, it is what it is...

it was not ment for grand writing, it doens't deserve that...

 

[lady luck]

Don't think it something you'll decide, sweetie!

 

[Amélie]

Don't think it something you'll decide, sweetie!

huh what do you mean? i can't follow

 

[lady luck]

it was just the comment on your poem...
I mean, you tell the things you do not want, but I am learning you can't control feelings & falling in love that much.