Dont wake me up

[Idiosyncrasy]

I�m lost in this beautiful haven
A world exactly how I would dream
With my life pleasures spread about
Peace
Solace
My mind is tranquil, at ease
Collapsing on a bed of clouds
Clean crisp air through my lungs
A comfortable hug
A knowing smile

And they are just a shadow
In the background
Laughing
And laughing
At what could never be�..

Don�t wake me up

 

[ACROB@T]

My mind is tranquil, at ease
Collapsing on a bed of clouds
Clean crisp air through my lungs
A comfortable hug
A knowing smile

sometimes I wish.....

 

[zooropamanda]

Its quite amazing how often writing here is about love.
That last line got me.

 

[BabyGrace]

that's cause love is the best emotion and most of life centers around either it or its absence..

I can't even pinpoint why but I love this poem, and I'd agree with Manda, it has a great ending that just kind of hits you

A comfortable hug
A knowing smile

And they are just a shadow...




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You make yourself vulnerable to change in your life. But in the end, you've got to become the change you want to see in the world.
-the B-man

 

[Idiosyncrasy]

Thanks.. your words mean a lot.