Cosmic Crush

[Bonochick]

I saw it coming, but I played dumb
I was hoping that you would too
You wrote the rules and then broke them all
Such a dirty thing to do
But I can't help it, I'm still in love
I gotta get away from you

An endless road to take me far from here
But you have the keys to my car
I pick up my bag, and I start to walk
But my legs won't get me far
My heart's too heavy to make this journey
So I guess it's back to the bar

A drunken caress
To help me fix this mess
Send my mind to outer space
The stars and planets
Dish out some hard hits
But still I see your face

It's time for last call, but I'm still crying
I guess I'm too numb to get drunk
The sidewalk wavers and street lights flicker
Reminding me of that punk
Staying out 'til four, sleeping in 'til noon
Drugs and flowers in the trunk

You greeted me with a groggy smile
Followed by a smoky kiss
To you, it was just your party life
But to me, it was pure bliss
I was the anchor for your sinking ship
A useless figure you won't miss

A drunken caress
To help me fix this mess
Send my mind to outer space
The stars and planets
Dish out some hard hits
But still I see your face

Your galaxies
Bring me to my knees
Stars explode
I implode
Travel by hearse
Through your universe

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Great. "I was the anchor to your sinking ship" is my favorite line.

 

[TheBrazilianFly]

 

[my_kite]

Very very cool!! I love it!!

 

[Diemen]

This has a great flow to it, sounds like something Mr. Adams might sing.

You greeted me with a groggy smile
Followed by a smoky kiss
To you, it was just your party life
But to me, it was pure bliss
I was the anchor for your sinking ship
A useless figure you won't miss

This part is pure genious. Great writing, Kat.