VertigoGal
Rock n' Roll Doggie FOB
Okay, I'm new here, so be nice...constructive criticism is appreciated though! These are a series of poems I've written in the past month that are all sort of connected in theme. They're all somewhat autobiographical, although I swear I'm not a suicidal freak! I can be melodramatic when it comes to poetry...but anyway tell me what ya think...I think I'm too literal, I need to work on metaphors...I also seem like the victim in all my poems, which isn't the intent...
anyhoo:
WHAT'S YOUR NAME
Time
Only numbs us
Dull the pain
Fade the stain
Take this pill it goes away
A drop of rain
In the hurricane
For better or worse
What’s your name?
anyhoo:
WHAT'S YOUR NAME
Time
Only numbs us
Dull the pain
Fade the stain
Take this pill it goes away
A drop of rain
In the hurricane
For better or worse
What’s your name?