pure

[The Wanderer]

grey skirt
over
laps
of
white blizzard

softly penetrate
layers
of
dark
subtle wilderness

heaven scent
lip
of
clouds
moisten God

 

[adamswildhoney]

I like it!!!

 

[Blue_Angel]

you are such a clever writer

 

[The Wanderer]

thank you.

you're very kind.

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

 

[famous rungi]

i am god

Say, this reminds me of that Bukowski poem I posted weeks ago.

foray

 

[The Wanderer]

in what way??

 

[foray]

uh-oh did I offend?

Nothing much, really; just that it's erotic and ends God.

 

[Bonochick]

I must say...I am very impressed by people who can pack so much power into so few words. Very nice.