chickadee
New Yorker
circa1992 said:
Awesome
You should go to the half price ticket place and see a Broadway Show
I'd love to do that! But I dunno where anything is, lol!
circa1992 said:
Awesome
You should go to the half price ticket place and see a Broadway Show
chickadee said:
I'd love to do that! But I dunno where anything is, lol!
circa1992 said:
It's right in time square, you'd be able to find it easily Broadway shows are my favorite When are you going?
chickadee said:
I'm going in september. I'm working near Boston for the summer then doing a wee bit of travelling! So I don't have long for each city I'll be in. only about 3 days for New York so I know I can't see a lot but I'll be on my own!
chickadee said:I'll be honest... I'd do any of them! Individually or together... now there's a nice idea!
Wild, are you in the UK? Cos it's midnight for me too!
dazzledbylight said:i hope wild's gonna share Bono with me
circa1992 said:
If you can, go to a museum and if at all possible, try and see a broadway show Just my opinion, I live close-ish to NYC so I'm there often
chickadee said:How long is your essay supposed to be Sarah? (I'm Kat by the way lol!)
I'd make a new paragraph at "a lot of this story..." in the first big paragraph, it seems to be a new argument you are making and I think that would be better.
ThoraSEB said:Sarah - I really like your essay. You have some really great points, and it's well written.
chickadee said:
Yeah I'd love to see a museum as well. I'm more worried about where I am going to stay! Lol! All opinions are welcome definitely! As I said I've never been so I need people to recommend stuff.
JezSnape said:Sarah, sounds good
I really like your essays, you always make good points, and argue well
Well, my dear friends, I'm gonna go to bed now. I'm so tired, and when my spelling gets worse than my babysister's, I know it's time to go
Night everyone
sami0201 said:Rachel Fuller is cleaning out her closet and putting her stuff on ebay She's so funny!
chickadee said:Well Sarah I haven't read the book so it's hard for me to give any useful suggestions, lol! I'm not sure exactly what your tutor/teacher is looking for. I think maybe you could expand the paragraph about rape, and maybe quote a bit from the book to back up your point that it's not graphic? Maybe the fact that it's not graphic adds to its importance in the novel (I don't know if it does, haven't read it!) and if it WAS graphic, would that matter or is the issue itself more important. If that makes sense.
haha, just feel free to ignore me obviously, lmao!
WildHoney said:
Sarah, your essay is awesome as usual
WildHoney said:
Would you get that excited if i put my clothes on ebay
sami0201 said:
That's what my dad said I really like this bag she put on though He's like "I don't care who she is, it's still her old crap"
circa1992 said:
Ok, thanks....I think that could work
Now I just have to think of a really good title
chickadee said:
Your essay is really good by the way lol, didn't mean to sound as if I didn't think so! You write well and it's got a structure to it and also spelling etc is all great! (I'm studying English at university, I can't help it!) Just because the rape is obviously important to the story I think you could strengthen your point there.
Title, hmm, am useless myself! My fics always have really bad titles!
"To Kill A Mockingbird... without killing the issues"
or something?
No that's really bad, haha! Told ya