"She's Out There"

[uwwedoogie]

I'm back at the beginning again,
I've been going in circles again,
I still haven't found my friend,
but I know she's out there.

I think and I dream,
of you being here with me,
but when I'm not around,
do you think of me?

I want to be with you,
I swear, I really do,
do you want me too?
or is this all part of my imagination.

What have I done,
if anything was it wrong,
I'm down here under the sun,
waiting for you for you to come.

I'm not waiting anymore,
Because I've waited far too long,
I want you to step your foot in that door,
so I can see your face once more.

I can't get this straight,
I thought love was part of faith,
and it happens for you,
when you need it to.

Do you still love me?
Or do I still love you?
'cause this love isn't pulling me through,
the way I hoped it to.

Is this the end,
will I never find my friend,
will I go in circles again,
empty handed again.

It's gonna be hard to try,
'cause I know your out there,
I see you in my dreams at night,
but they won't be realised.

I'm walking down that road again,
have I lost my friend,
did I ever even find that friend,
maybe she's waiting at the end,
Beacuse I know she's out there.


what you think?

 

[AcrobatMan]

i love it ...

 

[The_Edge89]

This is yours?!
Whoa that's just....awesome!


I'm tryin' to write songs...can't get it to work though...
Any suggestions that I might try?

 

[beli]

Beautiful :clap:

 

[The_Edge89]

Sitting here listening to Velvet Dress from sarajevo and I thought the beginning of this poem reminds me of the begginning of Velvet dress...awesome...just beautiful

 

[uwwedoogie]

i was listening to velvet dress while writing this!!!

 

[The_Edge89]

Oh...that explains it!

Anyway, it's a beautiful poem.

 

[uwwedoogie]

thanks!