BabyGrace
Refugee
I wrote this for school actually; I feel sort of presumptuous(sp?) posting it now with all the material that has been brought up, but I was hoping to get some opinions about whether or not, well I guess whether or not the poem is tactless because for some reason I think it is, maybe because it's outside commentary on something that is not mine to talk about.
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he stops to breathe as the morning birds
call noisily through the darkness,
loudly affirming their life to the sleeping city;
soon, another day will awaken
with more prayers and more death
as the sun slips over the stones of the East wall.
his bare feet quicken on the
closed dirt road and rebirth shines
brilliantly in his dark eyes.
narrow streets run past ancient mysteries
and undying fires, his brown skin
brushes the path of his burdened Christ,
and he knows the hatred that is born again
each day from the love that was so freely given.
his body is a temple,
his blood the sacrifice;
what God would allow such three-sided,
many-angled death to breed in
the place He has touched?
the boy falters and sinks to his knees as he passes
mosques, synagogues, and churches alike;
his lips rose red with blood as his
neighbors stand near, watching his fight against
the forced entry to this veiled cycle.
he shudders gently and then falls victim to the conquest,
his young body gathering dust on the street.
God weeps as holiness is slain in the city,
His tears startle the parched earth,
washing clean their hands as they wander off
to rape truth with possessiveness and
protect the uncertain ghosts of their belief.
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he stops to breathe as the morning birds
call noisily through the darkness,
loudly affirming their life to the sleeping city;
soon, another day will awaken
with more prayers and more death
as the sun slips over the stones of the East wall.
his bare feet quicken on the
closed dirt road and rebirth shines
brilliantly in his dark eyes.
narrow streets run past ancient mysteries
and undying fires, his brown skin
brushes the path of his burdened Christ,
and he knows the hatred that is born again
each day from the love that was so freely given.
his body is a temple,
his blood the sacrifice;
what God would allow such three-sided,
many-angled death to breed in
the place He has touched?
the boy falters and sinks to his knees as he passes
mosques, synagogues, and churches alike;
his lips rose red with blood as his
neighbors stand near, watching his fight against
the forced entry to this veiled cycle.
he shudders gently and then falls victim to the conquest,
his young body gathering dust on the street.
God weeps as holiness is slain in the city,
His tears startle the parched earth,
washing clean their hands as they wander off
to rape truth with possessiveness and
protect the uncertain ghosts of their belief.