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Old 03-19-2001, 10:37 PM   #1
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don't ever let go

this isn't a poem or anything folks...just writing things that I feel right now...feel free to add on if ya like....

don't ever let go
of everything you feel
hold on forever
to everything you know
be strong like the wind
bright as the stars
never sit down
in times you should stand
whatever you do
don't ever let go.......
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Old 03-20-2001, 12:46 PM   #2
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Time feels like it's wasting away slowly
Like a piece of paper
Which has residual scribbles
Of years left far beyond
And cast into a fire to melt away
Into glowing embers
And ash
Of what has been

And on that piece of paper
The scribbles
Seem to etch out two very familiar names
Yet they melt away
And are part of the hellish fire
That has destroyed them

Who started the fire?
Who cast this piece of paper
Into the fire
From itís sacred holding in the shelf Underneath my pillow?
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Old 03-21-2001, 09:33 AM   #3
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What else is a poem, if not feelings put into words? Very inspiring, popkid.

And, silver, your response was beautiful as well. Scribbles on paper tucked away on the shelf underneath a pillow. Great!



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**Still looking for the
face I had before the
world was made....**

**Work like you don't
need money, love like
you've never been hurt,
and dance like no
one's watching.**
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Old 03-23-2001, 01:38 PM   #4
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don't ever let go
hold on tight
to what has been yours
and will surely be again
don't wait on time
don't wait on mind
always go forth
seek the intangible
the love in your heart
always go forth
and don't ever let go...
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Old 03-24-2001, 06:51 AM   #5
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The more I let go of,
the more I have
But I will never let fly
that which lets me fly
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Old 03-28-2001, 01:19 PM   #6
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But they never let go.
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