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War Child
Join Date: Sep 2000
Location: Half a mile from what she said...
Posts: 897
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don't ever let go
this isn't a poem or anything folks...just writing things that I feel right now...feel free to add on if ya like....
__________________don't ever let go of everything you feel hold on forever to everything you know be strong like the wind bright as the stars never sit down in times you should stand whatever you do don't ever let go....... |
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Babyface
Join Date: Nov 2000
Location: Everett, WA, USA
Posts: 15
Local Time: 04:36 AM
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Time feels like it's wasting away slowly
__________________Like a piece of paper Which has residual scribbles Of years left far beyond And cast into a fire to melt away Into glowing embers And ash Of what has been And on that piece of paper The scribbles Seem to etch out two very familiar names Yet they melt away And are part of the hellish fire That has destroyed them Who started the fire? Who cast this piece of paper Into the fire From it’s sacred holding in the shelf Underneath my pillow? |
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The Fly
Join Date: Nov 2000
Location: Houston, TX USA
Posts: 133
Local Time: 11:36 PM
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What else is a poem, if not feelings put into words? Very inspiring, popkid.
And, silver, your response was beautiful as well. Scribbles on paper tucked away on the shelf underneath a pillow. Great! ------------------ **Still looking for the face I had before the world was made....** **Work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching.** |
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Refugee
Join Date: Oct 2000
Location: even NJ loves NY
Posts: 2,095
Local Time: 11:36 PM
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don't ever let go
hold on tight to what has been yours and will surely be again don't wait on time don't wait on mind always go forth seek the intangible the love in your heart always go forth and don't ever let go... |
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Rock n' Roll Doggie
Join Date: Nov 2000
Location: full of sound and fury
Posts: 3,386
Local Time: 05:36 PM
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The more I let go of,
the more I have But I will never let fly that which lets me fly |
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Babyface
Join Date: Nov 2000
Location: Everett, WA, USA
Posts: 15
Local Time: 04:36 AM
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But they never let go.
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