Are memories always nice at 20?

[Amélie]

Hi, I'm new here. Since a couple of weeks i try to write some poems or lyrics (don't know yet) but i have no idea if i'm crap, i might be....
can you give your opinion, you don't have to be nice...

Are memories always nice at 20?

Remember me
cause you'll hear my voice
Remember me
cause I'll stand up, no choice
Remember me
cause it's necessary
Remember me
if you don't you'll regret it

Remember me
night and day
Remember me
alive or dead
Remember me
winter and summer
Remember me
because I need you to

I'll remember you, can't say how
I'll remember you, don't know why
I'll remember you, maybe i'll cry
I'll remember you, till the day you die
I'll remember you, can't say how
I'll remember you, even now...

When I remember you
it's not always fun
When I remember you
not looking to the sun
When I remember you
my eyes are dark
When I remember you
not even a spark
When I remember you
my heart is crying
When I remember you
I would like to be dying




yeah you made it, no more torture
thanks for reading till the end

 

[valentina]

Touching!

And, btw, I', twenty. But not all of my memories are nice...

 

[my_kite]

I liked it!! Congrats...and no...not all memories are good at 20 (believe me!!)

I think that, if you are a begginer...you'll have a cool journey ahead!!! Keep up the good work!!!