To sound professional, I think they should cut a little from the part coming just before the vocals go in. It's a little too long of the same thing, the song is already long enough, you know.
Also, the transition between the part of the pre-chorus with the "the young and used" stuff in it and the chorus is a bit unnatural. Both parts individually sound great, but I don't like how they come into each other. But then again, this song is not completed and if I got this right, it's a version from last summer? That's quite a long time ago.
Also, the transition between the part of the pre-chorus with the "the young and used" stuff in it and the chorus is a bit unnatural. Both parts individually sound great, but I don't like how they come into each other. But then again, this song is not completed and if I got this right, it's a version from last summer? That's quite a long time ago.