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adamswildhoney

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Okay I have been a busy bee lately with writing my poetry so I decided instead of writing all of the works I have done lately I will just write the titles and then if you want to know what one of poems is like then you must leave a reply asking for the poem you want me to write out k. HERE THE LIST!!

*Fighting Everything
*Slowly Falling Apart
*Love Doesnt Have a Room for Me
*The days Music Changed the World
*Miracle
* Irish In Me
*Looking in the Mirror
*Under blankets of Stars
*Flower
*Sunshine
*Second Guess
*Beaten
*No Friends
*Stimulus
*All of My Emotions on My Face
*Music
*Crack of Down
*Things are Changin
*Hidden Voice
*Wide Awake
*How Long?
*Sleep Tonite
*Truly Me
*No Cover
*Road Trip
*To be little again
*Cloudy Day
*Wandering Alone
*Helping Hand
*If You Could
*Pain of Loss

Okay dokey I think that is the list for right now that is! I will try to post the requested poems has soon as I can. Tho right now I am not home so I cant post poems they are all saved on my comp.
 
:eek: slight spelling error *has been half asleep all day* it should be "Crack of Dawn"

psst I will type those up when I get home which will be about 6hrs from now!!!
 
Well, now one of us needs to write something called "Crack of Down" because I love that title. :D
 
me too! i'm sorry, adamswildhoney,
i really thought crack of down was your title,
and i thought it was great!
 
No Friends

You say you have friends
I say I dont
When will I be giving the chance to show
the ways of friendship

No one ever talks to me
I am just lonely so you see
Can?t you see the hurt that is
inside of me?
I try to explain my situation but
nothing comes with this hesitation

No friends for me to be seen
when will I have some to
share my world with

Joy is so hard for me to see
The world around me is turmoil
all I think about is my own pain
I wish I could be washed down a drain

Maybe that is why there are no friends for me

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

just to let ya know I am working with that titie "Crack of Down" nothing really solid yet but I will posted it as soon as I can but there's the first request.
 
*wonders if anyone cares about me* :(

More poem titles:

*Sense of Humor
*Down by the Creek
*Changing Me
*Attention Getter
*Freestyle
*Many Names
*All K's
*Ups and Down
*Loving Life
*Built On Memories
 
LarryMullen's_POPAngel said:
Under Blankets of Stars




ps- this forum is never bustling with a lot of activity. lots of people do view it, however, just some don't really like to post here for some reason. :hug:

Under blankets of Stars

Many thoughts come to me
as I lay under blankets of stars
What will my life bring for me?
Who will want to share it with me?
I wonder about the endless possibilities that
lay before me

I turn to my side and see you lying there
beside me
Is it true that I have finally found you?
Where did you come from and will you stay?
Under blankets of stars I gaze into my lovers
face

I feel you arms around me so tight and comforting
The nights under blankets of stars seem to last
forever
I wish I could stay like this with you gently kissing me
and whispering sweet things in my ear
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I know you guys all care about me or at least some do :lol: I am just trying to get more traffic into this forum bc we have alot of talented people in here!! :hug:
 
Silence
Midnight Stare
Down by the Creek


Nice stuff...
I haven't written any poems in... months... one crappy one doesn't count. More into stories atm.
 
Alisaura said:

In the silence I hear my heart beating, time slippin' away
I try to grab the memories that wont stay
Looking around for something to create sound
I just want to erase all that has been done
so that it wont replay in my mind again
All I hear is silence no sound
I try to listen for footsteps on the ground
in hopes that you might've be found

I know I must face the emptiness of this place
How can I when all I hear is silence intead of sound
I remember the nights we used to dance in each others
arms and you hold me to let me hear your hearbeat
All that greets me now is silence


*be back later with the other 2, gots to finish my hw*
 
adamswildhoney said:

I am just trying to get more traffic into this forum bc we have alot of talented people in here!! :hug:



:up: right there are a lot af them around here and you are definitly one of them!
 
Alisaura said:

Down by the Creek

I remember our adventures down by the creek
those hot summer days allow for us to get away
Mom would always tell us to looking out for Ivy
Skippin rocks and the rope swing were always
our favorite thing

Do you remember the day when the bum
came our way, I was so scared I ran
away as fast I could

Until I reach the house and yelled Mom there is
a bimbo chasing us, you laughed you hard because
It was all a trick to get me to go home

Down by the Creek, I remember thoses days down by the creek.
 
Fighting For Everything

Fighting for my breath
it feels like sippin quick sand
Fighting for my strength
I feel steel bars on my arms
Fighting for my sight
wheres the light of your love?
Fighting for Everything makes me weak
and I just want to live without fighting

Fighting for my voice
I am muffled and shy but I want you know my song
Fighting for my hearing
Sound brings the love of another to the heart of me
Fighting for my mind
Sometimes I wonder when I will be able to show my wisdom
Fighting for Everything makes me want to give up
on that I have been blessed with

Fighting for my love
Someday someone will know my love
Fighting for my body
I am beautiful no matter what others say

Fighting for everything is all that I seem to do
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
:happy: :wink:
requested by hippy!!

new works:

*Walk a Mile in My Shoes
*Yellow Birds
*Sailing Away
*No Judgments
*Inspirations
*Showtime: I posted this one awhile back its about U2 I have changed it completely and I really like it now!!
*Dreaming Twlight
*Underground Sound
*Rising Above
*Sheltered Life
*Wanting to Leave
*Not Able to say Goodbye
*

will be posting soon:
*Crack of Down
*Midnight Stare
 
thanks StratoEdge!! :up:


more works:

*State your Love
*Waterless
*Shout
*Belfast
*Irish Sea
*Touch Me
*Lovers and Tranquility
*Your Heart Beats Like A Drum
*Stop to Listen
*Holding on to Nothing
*Stranger walking up to me
*Where am I?
*Through the Redness
*Into the Sun
*Promise Land
*Trees in the Night
*Nowhere but Here
*Mother's Keeper
*Moonlight Dreaming
*John & I
*Is there anything for me?
*I went walking
*Into your eyes
 
some more:

*Found A Love
*Best Friend
*Panic Attack
*Writing
*Old Soul
*Black Wednesday
*Runaway Man
*R & B
*Adrian
*Influence
*Up @ 12am
*Mix it or Nix it
*Ideas
*Energy
*Gas Station
*Saving Me
*Worth it or Not?
*Guitar Case
*Notepad
*Gram's Hands
*Map
*Glass of Glitter
*NorthState
*Whiskeytown Lake
*Bottle w/ Change
*Redwood Forest
*Patrick's Point
*Unknown
*Is it for real?
*BrewMeister
*Houston
*Those before me
*Moyvanne
*Want to get out
*Looking through the window
*Headphones

I :heart: writing poetry, I cant believe I kept myself from this for so long.
 
bonosgirl84 said:
crack of down

all of us running around
like a chicken lose on the ground
No where to run nowhere to hide
just the crack of down inside

Crack of down
comes from the underground
swimming around in the heat of sound
like so alligator on the hound

Escaping is not the answer
just try to run faster
Crack down

~~~~~~

sorry it took so long I will post Midnight stare soon, I have seem to have lost it somewhere!!:der:
 
i love that you took a spelling mistake and made it art.
it turned out to be a wonderful poem.

this line is really great, "swimming around in the heat of sound."
 
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