This is the worst day ever

[Mullen4Prez]

This is the worst day ever
You're just sitting there
watching me and my life
I aint the show

to watch or to see
believe me when i say
you work too much
I dont get you anymore

Because this is the worst day ever
too much is going through my mind
I just need some space
Leave me alone for gods sake

Get out of my fucking life
I'll kill you if you dont stop watching
I'm checking my watch now
wondering when the worst day ever is going to end

I just want it to all stop
this bullshit is all around us
Its not even an emotion anymore
why do we try anymore

We'll all end up dead someday
Whats the point in trying
You're just going to have
the worst day ever

It feels like it will never end but
hey i ain't complaining
because its the worst day ever
Its not myh fault

Its the bitch that plots againist me
all the time
Now you drive in
and its now time to say our final good bye

 

[Mullen4Prez]

Wonders why zero dude has yet to comment...

 

[ZeroDude]

^
Sorry for making you wait

I just want it to all stop
this bullshit is all around us
Its not even an emotion anymore
why do we try anymore

That is the best passage in the whole piece, the concept and emotion in it stop it from being run of the mill, although it isn't amazingly written it does what is what meant to do convey how fucking pissed off you are

 

[~BrightestStar~]

^ what he said.

 

[Bonochick]

To me, it starts out sounding just delicate and sad...but then the use of "ain't" seems really abrasive...then I realize that the tone of the rest of it is pretty abrasive. I guess just from the first few lines, I was expecting something softer, and I got something harsh, so then it was a bit of a disappointment for me...but that's my own damn fault for how I perceived it. Therefore though, it took me aback a bit, and I really wasn't able to get much out of it.