"foreign policy"

[The Wanderer]

I am a dark boy
she is invisible

brown on white
eye for an eye

the white heat
of dark skin

I imagine what it's like
for her to be the white bitch

her milk is white
my milk is white
that is the only difference

it's nothing to me
words on paper
flame on oil

 

[foray]

Intriguing. I think I know what it's about but I'm not sure. Either the title is very apt or it's misleading..

foray

 

[The Wanderer]

there actually were 2 slightly different versions...

african-american


I am a dark boy
she is invisible

lost in the brown
on white eyes

the white heat
of the deep
dark skin

I imagine what it's like for her
to be a white bitch

her milk is white
my milk is white
that is the only difference

it's nothing to me
words on paper
flame on oil

 

[Gickies Gageeze]

i have a few ideas as to what your poem is referring to as well, including the thought that this might be about "space invaders."

seriously though, and correct me if im wrong, but this issue hasnt been written about in dol yet, as it? interesting stuff.

 

[foray]

brown on white
eye for an eye

lost in the brown
on white eyes


I've always liked your clever wordplays. It's brilliant.


the white heat
of the deep
dark skin


Good idea to drop the 'deep'


Thanks, kreg


foray

 

[The Wanderer]

aw, fuarez