another one

[voxxie]

now i cant sleep

down of me is just my fear

if i could breath just a little more

and find that peace that you denied to me

and even now the spirit does not scare me

and the night is my home

and loneliness is not my friend

i need to be here,just be here



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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

 

[jala]

Great poem voxxie. I especiallly love the part of - "If I could breath just a little more - and find that peace that you denied me". Keep writing, I want to hear more.

 

[UpwiththeSun]

Originally posted by voxxie:

and find that peace that you denied to me

and even now the spirit does not scare me

Great poem Voxxie! This was my favorite line!