4

[AcrobatMan]

this is called 4 - ends the U2 way


4
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Dont insist on seeing
What you imagine
And open your eyes
What your eyes can see, see
Dont believe in the promises
You know they are broken
Once you leave
And when he leaves
And you thought it was your life
Life is fucked up
But you have long way to go
And she wont come to you
And you cant crawl to her
And life is fast
And you cant just flow
You better run
You better run
Run to a standstill

 

[ZeroDude]

Enigmatic

 

[Mullen4Prez]

Too short

 

[AcrobatMan]

I'll improve

It will be bigger and better from next time

 

[ZeroDude]

Nice to hear

 

[AcrobatMan]

have you read my poem( i prefer to call it writing!!) which is quite long and which i posted few months ago.. Called UNTITLED -i think

192 lines ( in 32 stanzas)

 

[ZeroDude]

Yes I did it was a bit of a chore to be honest but I enjoyed you'll have to find a happy medium imo