the blind march of life

[Marla's Little Secret]

the blind march of life
delivered me here
brainwashed by disciples
who accept without question

the blind march of life
holds comfort for the weak
to break from the path
is the ultimate freedom

the blind march of life
is not living your truth
but being pulled by the current
drifting toward the fall

the blind march of life
ends with an epitaph
to announce your departure
or that you existed at all?


[This message has been edited by Marla's Little Secret (edited 06-28-2001).]

 

[zooropamanda]

that was very strong
I like the repetition too, gave it a great rhythm.

 

[BabyGrace]

yes, it made it a march

little depressing but it's good to wonder these things

excellent piece

 

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Originally posted by Marla's Little Secret:

the blind march of life
is not living your truth
but being pulled by the current
drifting toward the fall

I've been trying to not march this march, but lately it hasn't been working. This was very moving for me Marla. Not much else I can say now.