Jick, the intro is well done. but I think there is something wrong with Bono's timing in the first vers. This is most likely because he actually sang it more loose, and without the rythm the bassline now delivers. When the drums come in it's a bit abrupt, but somehow still in time as far as I can hear. Think you did a good job shortening the piece in the midle, before Edges solo. IF this is the actual single version, I think they did a mistake not to record a new take in the first verse, and to do something about the drums jst before the first chorus.
Good job though.