Hey

[youtooellen]

Yes that is the title.

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hey, silence.
I thought I heard you there.
I wasn't sure if you wanted me to know.
can you tell me more?
I want to know you.
what happened to our future?
was this part of your plan?
hey, divine being.
won't you remind me why I'm here?
I can't see you.
I can't touch you.
I can't hear you.
are you everywhere?
just not here.
hey, kindness.
can you keep me warm tonight?
I want your mind.
let me wear your crown of thorns.
send me a sign.
nevermind.
you'll make me cry.
hey, happiness.
you're so dishonest.
why do you wallow in self-pity?
I can make your dreams come true.
if I tried.
hey, love.
you're bluer than any sky I've seen.
have you experienced me?
let me breath you in.
I'll teach you how to breathe.
hey, heart.
I knew you didn't die.
won't you let me hold you?
your beat is faint.
I'd like to stay and pry,
but I've got to put you down.
I make you orbit their lives.
follow me and I'll make it alright.
if you listen to me, we'll live tonight.

/end freestyle writing.

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I have a livejournal and I just freestyled. It's terribly truthful.

 

[Shevy]

Freestyle often produces terribly truthful writing...it's pretty cool ^_^

I'm blown away by how you've expressed so much with such simple wording. Thank-you for sharing this!

 

[youtooellen]

Thank you for your response! I really appreciate feedback on my writing and such.