"americas"

[The Wanderer]

explore
south pole
tongue of
the atlantic
pts. north
upon the equator
where the sea div-
ides, march of
tides, flooding
full moon, ripe
parted softly, the
flesh, belly of
a new world
discovered.

 

[zooropamanda]

im gonna give this a "thumbs up"!!!!

 

[oliveu2cm]

Sexay song Wanderer!!

Soo nice! I luv your split sentances and visualizations, and applying themes you wouldn't necessarily think of to love, or discovering a woman. v. cool!

 

[foray]

i love it.

ides, march

foray

 

[ghetofabu]

i liked it

 

[Stories for Boys]

where the sea div-
ides, march of
tides, flooding
full moon

excellent

 

[brettig]

Four stars.

 

[The Wanderer]

what am i a hotel now?

new car, caviar, 4 star daydream

think i'll buy me a football team

 

[Zoomerang96]

good work, ma boy