Scars Of Truth

[AcrobatMan]

Those false lies and these truthful liars,
The true truth are bought and Resold to make profits.

Fake illusions and a real paradise,
Open yours eyes, hell is not far away.

Those paper roses are pure love,
Trample the cactus flower, it has thorns.

Scars of truth My Possesions
Healing Healing those false lies


AcrobatMan

ps: hope i have not posted this before, as far as i remember i have not

 

[Bonochick]

Fake illusions and a real paradise,
Open yours eyes, hell is not far away.

I really love that, but "fake illusions" is a bit redundant. I think that kind of kills what are otherwise two really good lines.

 

[AcrobatMan]

glad u liked it

well i had written this some time back...

when i used to do a lot of true-false, heaven-hell kind of things..

and phrases like "true truths" & "fake illusions" were deliberate...

but these days...i am more precise... like u suggested..

 

[Bonochick]

The "true truths" went well with me because I instantly thought of something else...but the "fake illusions" tripped me up. I suppose it all comes down to personal interpretation.

 

[AcrobatMan]

there are real illusions as well

 

[Bonochick]

I like you, ya know that?