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lazarus

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LAST WORDS

history is betrayed at night
in the crimson haze of a cracked taillight,
on the backsteps of a memorized address
with the compact bite of an alligator bag

when rain hits the hands and hats
and windows of drab walk-up flats
the manholes exhale a dirty work wind;
late hour lovers run for cover

in white shirtsleeves and sweat he composed
the world's last ode to a wilting rose;
it blanched and turned away,
the soiled pots now vacant lots

when this form fails
she wears something borrowed and blue,
her calling card a transient embrace,
a detente at the cabstand
then she's waving out the back,
hand like a windshield wiper;
pull the coat tighter--
the lights all run yellow,
my pocket change becomes rosary beads;
now swallowed by the smoke
a thrown-away throat chokes
on hosannas to the heavens.



laz
 
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Very good writing Lazarus. I especially like this line:

"my pocket change becomes rosary beads;"

somehow this remains in my thoughts.

carol
wizard2c
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Heh

Well, I don't want to say it is your writing that gave me a headache. I can't overlook what the real cause is, heh.

Only a few things really make me cry, and your poem wasn't really about that subject, so honestly, it triggered no real emotional reaction. But that's how I am, I guess....

But enough about me




Last words...
Saying your prayers.
Seems kind of... unneccesary
Your life has already been decided by then

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everytime I read it I get a different meaning though
Good peice of art
 
Wonderful piece Laz, emotive, universal and eloquent, your an amazing writer so I advise you to keep it up:wink:
 
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