first time here

[BonoInAKilt]

okay. as you know..this is my first time posting here. anyways...here's some poems. they aren't any good. the first ones are about...love of course...ahh rejection...im so used to that word now..

With Open Arms

This feeling inside of me,
Of something new, something wonderful.
The night I first set my eyes upon you.
The way your voice touched my soul.
The way you smelled,
Your scent wrapping itself in my whole being.
Your eyes, piercing me deep within my soul.
I love everything about you,
But now you are so far away.
My heart searches for you.
I have been waiting for you all my life, just for you.
But, now you are gone.
That word echoes in my empty heart?
Gone.
The loneliness taking over me.
I need you to set me free.
Maybe we will meet again someday, if it is our destiny.
Until that time, I will be waiting, so very patiently for you to return?
I will be waiting with open arms.
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Why do I feel the way I do about you?
Why do I love everything you say to me?
My heart beast faster the closer you get.
After all these years,
You would think I forgot
About all the pain you brought.
Your face inches away from mine.
Why would I want to remember such horrible times?
The taste of your lips?
Your love reaching deep into my soul.
The feelings you stir in my heart?
Taking over the pain you once caused.
I'm so in love with you.
After all these years,
I still love you.
Just like I said I would,
When I promised you nothing but my undying love.
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Chains

She woke up, afraid to face the day
not wanting to move, but not wanting to stay in the same place
wanting to run
wanting to hide
She wants to break away from the feelings inside her
She can't hold on to this life any longer...
She longs to be free from the chains that bind her
a love so tight it almost chokes her
She longs to be with him,
to be able to be strong, to carry on
She can't break away
She can't live in this life without him
A struggle to be loved
A struggle to stay alive
A fight for life and death
A fight to be free from all of this hurt, all of this pain
Not wanting to be alone
the loneliness kills her deep within.
She can't hold on to her love any longer...
She let go, let go of her love
She feels emotion no more
A walking corpse of pain and suffering.
There's no life in her eyes, just a blank stare
She's dead to her love, to the world, and to herself.
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hmm that's all for now. i know they arent that good...

~Katelyn

 

[bonosloveslave]

I can safely say you are a better poet than I

 

[beegee]

hi bonoinakilt

you doubted your own work twice in your post. never do that. if it comes from within you, then your work always matters. they are not bad. there is a passion in them, and a lot of feeling, and that is very important. nice job.

~bg84

 

[BonoInAKilt]

hi bonoinakilt

you doubted your own work twice in your post. never do that. if it comes from within you, then your work always matters. they are not bad. there is a passion in them, and a lot of feeling, and that is very important. nice job.

~bg84

hello.

i know i shouldnt doubt my work..but i always do. especially when i post it somewhere. thats something i need to work on. but i thank you for the feedback

I can safely say you are a better poet than I

well i cant say anything to that..considering i have never read any of your poems. but i am sure they really good. and probably better than mine!

~Katelyn

 

[LoriHewson]

Great job!

Kateyln,

As usual your poems were great I always enjoy reading your work! I think you've got a real talent, so go for it! I don't know if I could post my stuff...lol.

Lori

 

[freeyourmind]

These poems are very deep. When I read them it affects me!

I just can say they're amazing