Angels and Insects

[The Wanderer]

the Debutantes step ligthly over our hearts,
painting rose petals over each eye lid,
the reflection becomes ghostly pale
in the drops of dew we drink till thirst
they wait for us to mutilate them

 

[zooropamanda]

its amazing how shorter poems can sometimes be more powerful than many others.

"painting rose petals over each eyelid" I love that.

[This message has been edited by zooropamanda (edited 07-24-2001).]

 

[brettig]

I think the short stuff presents us with an image...and it is left to our minds to develop it...i love that kind of thing

 

[hermes]

Awesome piece, I'm printing it out right now to kepp.

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Steve
SAME OLD STORY- Hardcore American Comedy

 

[foray]

Originally posted by hermes:
Awesome piece, I'm printing it out right now to kepp.

Can he do that? Quick, stop him! Plagiarizer!

yarof