lyrictician
Babyface
Hey Any songwriters out there? Want to share some work and get some feedback or constuctive criticism back? I'll go first, what do you guys think of this song that I wrote. Obviously it is a post-9/11 song, or at least that's what it turned out to be.
In the Streets of NYC
Written by lyrictician
Wise men, they don?t know a thing
No choir of angels, coming to sing
I see my brother, down on his knees
When I walk through the streets
The streets of New York City
There?s blood at the door
There?s fear in the window
There?s hate on the couch
Revenge in your mind
Surprise in the bedroom
Remorse in the air
You find yourself there
In the streets of New York City
And all of the things
You cannot forget
Are reminded by
An empty sky
And you can?t remember
The last time you laughed
But you know you cried
When America died
In the streets of New York City
In the Streets of NYC
Written by lyrictician
Wise men, they don?t know a thing
No choir of angels, coming to sing
I see my brother, down on his knees
When I walk through the streets
The streets of New York City
There?s blood at the door
There?s fear in the window
There?s hate on the couch
Revenge in your mind
Surprise in the bedroom
Remorse in the air
You find yourself there
In the streets of New York City
And all of the things
You cannot forget
Are reminded by
An empty sky
And you can?t remember
The last time you laughed
But you know you cried
When America died
In the streets of New York City
