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Old 12-22-2008, 12:30 PM   #1
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Drowning Man - Chapter Fifteen

Sorry for the confusion last chapter. Hope this explains everything.

And now, the exciting conclusion of "Drowning Man"...

See the stone set in your eyes
See the thorn twist in your side
I'll wait for you

Slight of hand and twist of fate
On a bed of nails she makes me wait
And I wait without you

With or without you
With or without you

Through the storm we reach the shore
You give it all, but I want more
And I'm waiting for you

With or without you
With or without you
I can't live
With or without you

And you give yourself away
And you give yourself away
And you give
And you give
And you give yourself away

My hands are tied
My body bruised, she's got me with
Nothing to win and
Nothing left to lose

And you give yourself away
And you give yourself away
And you give
And you give
And you give yourself away

With or without you
With or without you
I can't live
With or without you

With or without you
With or without you
I can't live
With or without you

With or without you


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Old 12-23-2008, 07:30 AM   #2
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I admit, I never expected it to end on a note like that!
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Old 01-04-2009, 04:27 PM   #3
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I like happy endings! Good job
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Old 01-07-2009, 04:13 PM   #4
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i like it.
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Old 01-08-2009, 09:01 PM   #5
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I've followed this story from the beginning. It was a crazy ride, but every moment I was on the edge of my seat, and loved it!

I'm sad it's all over, the conclusion was quick but wholly unexpected!

Great Work!
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Old 04-16-2009, 01:00 AM   #6
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Yeah, so...I, er, was reading this over and I don't like how it rambles, how it comes to an illogical conclusion, and other things.

But I'm going to put it to a vote. Tell me if you'd like to see me rewrite both Adam and Lucy and Drowning Man, or if you'll hurt me if I do.
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Old 04-19-2009, 10:43 AM   #7
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oohh..if it means we get another version of this fab story I vote for a rewrite Just make it quick though

I love this story. I admit I found the ending a bit odd but personally it didn`t bother me. If it means more Larry action to read then please do a rewrite
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Old 04-19-2009, 03:45 PM   #8
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oohh..if it means we get another version of this fab story I vote for a rewrite Just make it quick though

I love this story. I admit I found the ending a bit odd but personally it didn`t bother me. If it means more Larry action to read then please do a rewrite
Larry action????????????
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Old 04-19-2009, 05:40 PM   #9
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So that's four votes for, none against. (Ali gave me her vote via email) I'll keep the poll going for the rest of the week and tally the votes then. And no, no mercy rules!
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i vote for a rewrite as well (not that the original wasnt great!)
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Old 04-19-2009, 10:19 PM   #11
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i vote yes if it means more
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Old 04-19-2009, 11:56 PM   #12
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Not necessarily more, but the story told in a slightly different way,
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Not necessarily more, but the story told in a slightly different way,
Sounds good to me. When I said more, I just meant more reading in general since theres been a sort of dry spell in the fan fic section lately
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Sounds good to me. When I said more, I just meant more reading in general since theres been a sort of dry spell in the fan fic section lately
Too true. We all need something to help pass the time till the tour starts
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Old 04-21-2009, 10:21 PM   #15
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^ haha exactly
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Vote completed. I'll get to work on Chapter 1.
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