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Blue_Angel

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the light flutters as a dream.
two hands clasp together in prayer;
the fingers wind round each other,
holding their steady support
into the night.

which hand holds which?
I cannot see how the fingers
wrap in a circle
for the light is fading...

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I cant finish it, ive tried a bunch of different ways and i cant do it.
 
Wanderer, I hate that bouncy smiley thing, take it away please!!!!!

here's more scribble, this is all related kinda, i dunno
none of it finished or worked on if that matters but it doesnt really so anyway..

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the night opens around her
and sways in through the curtains
a world wide and full
of sad entropy
where every passion started
fades away to a soft death.
she holds him close
breathing in his vibrant, fragile life..
oh to feel so small
and full of joy against a sad world
where everything is born to die,
to stay here in this moment
full of promise and warmth,
to not know of endings...
 
The verse you have so far is beautiful- the lines flow
so well! Go away from them right now, and when you're
feeling poetic in the future come back to it. :yes:
 
thanks so much for reading guys. sorry I cant say what's inside of me better!
 

the night opens around her
and sways in through the curtains
a world wide and full


reminds me of Shakespeare's "The world is but a stage..."

to not know of endings...

niceee.. :yes:
 
the night opens around her
and sways in through the curtains
a world wide and full
of sad entropy

to stay here in this moment
full of promise and warmth,
to not know of endings...


beautiful
 
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