Sweet ilusion

[my_kite]

Hi there

You know, I think that most of us have sometime made questions about God, religion and how life goes on!! Myself...I keep asking....! And when I think i found the answer...i look around and I become all messed uo again! So, here are my thoughts!! Hope you like them!!

This one is called

Sweet Illusion

How good?s religion
When mistakes are all the same
Misunderstanding
But there?s no one we can blame

Maybe god has blind us
Things are better left unseen
Let hope be the vision
Let us find some self steam

I can?t surrender
I can not down my hands
Love and understanding
That?s the lie my heart demands

How dumb is a child
While believing in her dream
Let her breathe illusion
Keep her hidden where she?s been

Sometimes we?re soldiers
Fighting for the same beliefs
Women, man and children
All we fall into our knees

This is not our last chance
This can?t be our kiss goodbye
Let us make the difference
Let?s believe in you and I

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

I had a simaliar poem about my struggles with believing called "Delusion, Confusion!" You have you own awesome writing style.

 

[my_kite]

Thans.....YAY..you liked it!!

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

 

[isabelle_guns]

that was a good poem, that is how i feel

 

[my_kite]

Thanks isabelle....it is, isn't it?? Sometimes we simply feel incapable of changing things...but I think we need to change the way we face things!! WE CAN!!
Like Bono said: We can be the generation!!

 

[aine_hewson]

Do you have any kind of site with archives of your poems? I guess I'm here a bit late, just got two of yours, and loved them both!

Good job!!

 

[my_kite]

Hi there ... sure I do...

You can find some more at

www.everypoetisathief.blogspot.com

I keep posting them there!! Be my guest!!!!

Love
Tania