sanguine penguins

[frogbat]

Sweet repose oh fleet ? the satanic swan
Your dress will not mend that which you?ve undone

Our time here is wasted
None more so than yours
What is it you?re after?
As by your feet the world?s roof crumbles
Falling rafter after rafter

You kneel because you want to receive
Read the origin of species
You might do yourself a favour

You sanguine penguins
Are up in arms?
Ready to help on the holy Roman erections?

White washed tombs dressed in black
The beads are there but where?s the sweat?
A road need to be crossed
You put my life under threat

The condescending nuances a nuisance
Their purpose is the mystery
This world would be fucked if they ever found it out
And our laughter will turn into a shout

 

[BabyGrace]

wow...that was incredible
I can't pick out any pieces because it's all so good

 

[The Wanderer]

hmmm... this is very interesting, and extremely well written, I'm still not quite sure what you're getting at frog, and I mean that in a good way

I know you don't think highly of over-analysis, but when you write something like this, well, it deserves some attention... so, I'll get back to you on this one

 

[zooropamanda]

FB, I think that was the best poems of yours i've read yet.

Sorry I didn't reply sooner, I've not been here much lately.But then again, I dont think hardly anyone has

Really great poem matey.

 

[Surrealist]

you've got some great symbolism going on there frognation, personally, I would stay away from the "Roman erections" (enuchs are a little safer) but seriously, I think it is brilliant the way sanguine can be a double entendre here

but yeah, this is, put simply -- a masterpiece

+/-Wanderer