My first contribution

[Jack In The Box]

I hope that the main idea is understood, because the original language is Spanish, I like write about which I feel at the moment, I know I'm not the best in this, but sometimes it is good mental therapy.

here we go...

One Of These Mornings

One of these mornings,
You will see me next to you,
One of these mornings
Finally I will stop to cry.

One of these mornings,
I will wake up in another place,
I will wake up finally of my long dream
that it seems not finish.

One of these mornings,
I will change the world,
While only I have left to wait,
To that something, which is, happens.

One of these mornings,
I will watch your eyes and say I love you,
Finally I will kiss your lips,
And to make with you the love.

One of these mornings,
I will walk without fixed course,
And I will go to the sea,
To see as the waves break in my heart.

One of these mornings,
I will shout to the indifference in his face,
And kick his horrible face,
I will free myself of my fatality.

One of these mornings,
I will capture to you and we will go away together,
To a place designed only for us,
A place far from here.

One of these mornings,
I will fixedly watch the sun,
And it will not blind me,
I will watch it thinking in your love.

One of these mornings,
I will reject this feeling
That it takes the air and drowns to me,
That daily it torments me.

One of these mornings,
I will run to the arms of the moon,
And my scars will close,
And my pain will seem that it goes away.

One of these mornings,
My blood will let spill in vain,
My body will not be tired,
And my eyes will return to see.

One of these mornings,
What today I?m living,
Everything, will seem a dream,
And finally this will finish.

One of these mornings,
That will happen,
And tired to wait I?m?
But only wait I can.

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is my firts time here

 

[Strato Edge]

I thought is was very good. As long as the stuff your writing about explains the way you feel, it will always be good.

 

[Jack In The Box]

I know, I know, is very long, I'm thinking about doing the edit version or "director's cut"

 

[beegee]

actually, hearing your "accent" in a poem with that much emotion is quite lovely.
i enjoyed it very much. nice work.

 

[Jack In The Box]

thank you very much, soon I will put other works and I will deal with which they are brief

 

[Strato Edge]

Doesn't really matter how long they are....But hey keep posting

 

[Jack In The Box]

thanx Strato... in next days I will do it

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

 

[freeyourmind]

Jack In The Box

pleas do me a favour and do not cut some pieces out. It is just perfect as it is by now!

 

[Jack In The Box]

ok, remains the long version, thanks for your commentaries, soon I will post more, I must translate them of Spanish to English