Christine1701
The Fly
Hello. I've got some poems.
What do you think about them?
She still needs love
Still a child
She can't fend for herself
Her parents think she can
Achieve greatness on her own
But she can't
A helping hand is all she needs
Someone to be there to cure the
Fears, emotional heartbreak,
The lonliness that haunts
Her very soul
Look at her, she's alone
Her soul ripped open,
For everyone to see, stung
By the dust of the earth,
The outright injustice of her life.
And she crys
Tears not of agony, not of pain,
Not of physical strife
But, crying because that love
She desperately needs,
That love that keeps her young
Soul alive
Has blown away with the wind.
Calm, By the shore
See the waves splash
on the rocks
oh how it moves me
it does wonders for the soul
see the birds fly
flying without a care
in the world
see the sun set
in all its glory
laying its head to sleep
to wake refeshed the next morning
see the love, see the harmony
between two people walking along the shore
talking and laughing
embracing eachother
and gazing at lifes wonders all around
this is tranquillity
this is serenity
By the shore
Into the Heart
The sun shined down in one area of the garden. It shown upon a rose, closed to the world, unable to open and free itself to grow. So it remained as a bud.
The clouds formed rain, moisture and lightning in an instant. All of of its energy spilled onto one innocent little flower.
But nothing happened.
Both the rain and shine gave up. No effort was taken place. So, the bud stayed as it was.
A little boy walked by and layed his eyes upon the bud, curiously, he approached it. He touched it, he breathed on it, gave it water, and cared for it tenderly.
And the next day the bud opened.
The Life We Live
Living by todays standards is hard
Be one thing
Act on as another,
Things we do might make you shudder
We come back and see what we have done,
And regret it.
Helpless beings are shunned.
Fake, plastic vessels of human mark what are society should "act",
A certain way, said as "tact."
Same old routine.
Taken aback by the scene of sadness.
All of us are the same to a certian level,
We all should be treated equally.
They revel in our dismay and sickness.
We were once lost and astray,
But in our own time,
We will conqure our fears, our irrational thoughts,
Our self battles and tears.
Today is the day to be brave,
The time for each and every one of us to behace.
Forgive, forget, put the past behind us.
Express the exess of emotion, commotion
Of chaos.
Sit back in your bed and finally be at peace.
The anachy will cease.
Pessimistic emotion gove,
Disenchantment with todays society, gone.
And at last..
The serenity will be with us all.
They are cheezy aren't they? Hm..
Don't tell anyone, I don't want them to eat it! 
bwahahaha.
wow. that was random. :
What do you think about them?
She still needs love
Still a child
She can't fend for herself
Her parents think she can
Achieve greatness on her own
But she can't
A helping hand is all she needs
Someone to be there to cure the
Fears, emotional heartbreak,
The lonliness that haunts
Her very soul
Look at her, she's alone
Her soul ripped open,
For everyone to see, stung
By the dust of the earth,
The outright injustice of her life.
And she crys
Tears not of agony, not of pain,
Not of physical strife
But, crying because that love
She desperately needs,
That love that keeps her young
Soul alive
Has blown away with the wind.
Calm, By the shore
See the waves splash
on the rocks
oh how it moves me
it does wonders for the soul
see the birds fly
flying without a care
in the world
see the sun set
in all its glory
laying its head to sleep
to wake refeshed the next morning
see the love, see the harmony
between two people walking along the shore
talking and laughing
embracing eachother
and gazing at lifes wonders all around
this is tranquillity
this is serenity
By the shore
Into the Heart
The sun shined down in one area of the garden. It shown upon a rose, closed to the world, unable to open and free itself to grow. So it remained as a bud.
The clouds formed rain, moisture and lightning in an instant. All of of its energy spilled onto one innocent little flower.
But nothing happened.
Both the rain and shine gave up. No effort was taken place. So, the bud stayed as it was.
A little boy walked by and layed his eyes upon the bud, curiously, he approached it. He touched it, he breathed on it, gave it water, and cared for it tenderly.
And the next day the bud opened.
The Life We Live
Living by todays standards is hard
Be one thing
Act on as another,
Things we do might make you shudder
We come back and see what we have done,
And regret it.
Helpless beings are shunned.
Fake, plastic vessels of human mark what are society should "act",
A certain way, said as "tact."
Same old routine.
Taken aback by the scene of sadness.
All of us are the same to a certian level,
We all should be treated equally.
They revel in our dismay and sickness.
We were once lost and astray,
But in our own time,
We will conqure our fears, our irrational thoughts,
Our self battles and tears.
Today is the day to be brave,
The time for each and every one of us to behace.
Forgive, forget, put the past behind us.
Express the exess of emotion, commotion
Of chaos.
Sit back in your bed and finally be at peace.
The anachy will cease.
Pessimistic emotion gove,
Disenchantment with todays society, gone.
And at last..
The serenity will be with us all.
They are cheezy aren't they? Hm..
Don't tell anyone, I don't want them to eat it! bwahahaha.wow. that was random. :
Very nice, first time? Amazing. It is actually very brave of your to put feelings down to paper 
You post one of your poems and I'll post one of my own, alright?? 
You recognized the quote! 
The thing is half of the words I didn't understand, but I'll look for them in the dictionary, I promise!! 
It's funny you find inspiration in U2 lyrics to write, sometimes when I write I unconsciously realise I've been thinking of a U2 song while writing them, or I find Bonoish influences in what I just wrote 
I have a notebook in which I keep everything I write 
in that way I avoid losing it 
He's loves all of your poems!
It is actually quite amazing... 
?? OMG, that's such a great idea!!! 
That's definitely got my approval! 
mwahaha, you're mighty funny 
