Haunted (the demo)

[popkidu2]

A long time ago, I posted the lyrics to a song I wrote titled "Haunted"

I've been rummaging through old lyrics and music for inspiration, and decided to try and put some music to this song. It's really really really rough. Just an idea right now, but I thought I'd share it w/ you guys. I haven't really figured out the melody line completely, and the chorus needs a lot of work, but anyway....

You can download the song at: http://home.earthlink.net/~nswogger/studio.html

scroll down, it's on the left hand side.

Here are the lyrics:

Haunted

fire
hold it in your hands
wire
threaded across the land
nothing
can make it ever right
water
see it dancing in the light

and I can't make you dissapear
and I can't ever let you know

waiting
can feel it pushing back at me
haunted
never knowing what to do
taste it
let it slip beneath your tounge
forever
dying younger at the gun

and I can't make you dissapear
and I can't ever let you know