faust

[voxxie]

suddenly feel the light
and be scare of the knowledge
knowing that your bonds
use to make you stronger
you realized that blood is just a liquid
and you keep it as a teasure
and you just hide in the nigth
and see your eyes become into a sea
just old like the last time...................


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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

 

[scatteroflight]

Originally posted by voxxie:

and see your eyes become into a sea
just old like the last time...................

Wow. This poem sounds like it is about the last scene of the play Faust. (Hmm, what made me think that?

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[The Wanderer]

you realized that blood is just a liquid
and you keep it as a teasure

those are two of the best lines I've read in this place

 

[voxxie]

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

 

[BabyGrace]

Originally posted by voxxie:

you realized that blood is just a liquid
and you keep it as a teasure

a very good Mexican poet
thanks voxxie

 

[travu2]

This poem is like a little gem of truth. With only a handful of lines you can cause a person to rub up against their mortality.

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"Wake up.. some things you can't get around."

King B