I'm starting to feel bad for always criticizing w/out actually ever sharing my own work.
So just for that, cudos to that.
The first and most important thing for "One" is the PU positions, which you didn't alter at all: Neck PU for the entire song except for the climax/coda in the end when you hit that very high D, there it's the bridge PU. Very essential to the tone.
Your rotary sounds great, I just love that effect on one. Your sound is very distorted, not sure if the camera adds to that but try a little less distortion. Also, the coda needs delay w/ one strong repeat.
The riffs: Most, especially the main riff, are different to what Edge plays, but since you learned by ear this is like the least thing to note. The 2nd part of the main riff for instance, you're just playing C variations w/ a power chord, which actually makes it more difficult because if you just play an open C all you need to do is move the ring finger around.
There, I did it again.
Maybe if I'm back early enough on Monday I'll post a few secs of the intro and spare you the youtube stuff for good will
PS: Make sure you upload some of the album online so we can give it a listen, curious to hear what sort of direction you're heading.