Want to play a game?

[MrBrau1]

I've written and recorded 2 pieces of music. One, is a honkey tonk country song. The other most closely fits the trip-hop bill. Yet, I can't write lyrics to save my life.

The "game" is, does anyone want to listen to my songs and try and write lyrics? The musicians w/ recorders could simply record lyrics and vocals over my backing tracks, and post here. Or anyone else could just write lyrics and sent them over, or post them.

Here they are:

Country Caper Song

http://s51.y s i.com/d.aspx?id=3PVUL0LNM9P982VWIIS5OSEXSY

Groove Trap

http://s39.y s i.com/d.aspx?id=2C15U1WXZ8QC71HJUCFKJ2I3HC

I totally just want to have fun with this. I know ther are some creative people here, so let's hear it.

 

[MrBrau1]

Nobody?

A forum full of music experts and not a single poet or lyricist?

C'mon

 

[t8thgr8]

change up the bass, its too repetitive. have the rythym section change up somewhere in the middle or something. and put the bass more in the background so that it doesnt drown out everything else. and turn up the guitar a little, you can barely hear the little bit thats there.

id love to write my first set of lyrics. ive been trying to kick around some ideas lately.