My (new) bands mp3's

[fluffy123]

Five tracks. Five tracks only. I'm the drummer in this side-project, hello.

I just need as many opinions on these tracks as is possible, kind of ignore the vocals as theyre mainly just being read off a piece of paper, but hey...opinions on anything, the songs, music etc. They are very very rough and done as 'live' in one take. But I'll take on board anything you think. Thanks!

Track1- Fuck Her
http://s42.you send it.com/d.aspx?id=...5E2MBT7U4PMGAS9

Track2- Smile (Lost for A While)
http://s42.you send it.com/d.aspx?id=...9T27BFDPY2EV2YQ

Track3- The Walls
http://s42.you send it.com/d.aspx?id=...MJ07GOUGFFM4VHH

Track4- Gone
http://s42.you send it.com/d.aspx?id=...OO19G1ZLMIOQ9NA

Track5- Sssh! Rooms!
http://s42.you send it.com/d.aspx?id=...XY34QFE6GR7HZG4

- Remember to remove the gaps between you send it in the URL's!

 

[MrBrau1]

You've got to fix those link postings. The whole addy isn't available, the "..." is screwing it up.

 

[impy13]

make it say ysi instead of you send it

 

[fluffy123]

Sorry!

Track1- Fuck Her
http://s42.ysi.com/d.aspx?id=5E2MBT7U4PMGAS9

Track2- Smile (Lost for A While)
http://s42.ysi.com/d.aspx?id=9T27BFDPY2EV2YQ

Track3- The Walls
http://s42.ysi.com/d.aspx?id=MJ07GOUGFFM4VHH

Track4- Gone
http://s42.ysi.com/d.aspx?id=OO19G1ZLMIOQ9NA

Track5- Sssh! Rooms!
http://s42.ysi.com/d.aspx?id=XY34QFE6GR7HZG4

 

[MrBrau1]

Still no good. Do it like this:

http://s51. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=13IFLIN5P4KLD1WVK2A7A6BDII

 

[fluffy123]

Ok, should be sussed now?

 

[MrBrau1]

Ok, should be sussed now?

No, you've just got to break the link up.

Copy and paste the text of the link, and put spaces in like this:

you send it

We wanna hear!

 

[fluffy123]

Wow...I doubt it's even worth all this fuss! hehe

Now, voila!

Track1- Fuck Her
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=3HSKURTLWPM5E2MBT7U4PMGAS9

Track2- Smile (Lost for A While)
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=2N2S81LTS9D9T27BFDPY2EV2YQ

Track3- The Walls
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=23IXFRWB83DMJ07GOUGFFM4VHH

Track4- Gone
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=1YWYDAB47FOOO19G1ZLMIOQ9NA

Track5- Sssh! Rooms!
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=37TSJ7205TSXY34QFE6GR7HZG4

These should work!

 

[MrBrau1]

Still no good.

Send me the links, i'll post them:

brau1@yahoo.com

 

[fluffy123]

If you quote my last post, then copy and paste the link and remove the spaces it'll work

 

[MrBrau1]

Track1- Fuck Her
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=3HSKURTLWPM5E2MBT7U4PMGAS9

Track2- Smile (Lost for A While)
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=2N2S81LTS9D9T27BFDPY2EV2YQ

Track3- The Walls
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=23IXFRWB83DMJ07GOUGFFM4VHH

Track4- Gone
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=1YWYDAB47FOOO19G1ZLMIOQ9NA

Track5- Sssh! Rooms!
http://s42. you send it .com/d.aspx?id=37TSJ7205TSXY34QFE6GR7HZG4

 

[MrBrau1]

Not bad. Could be a little tighter, but you said it was 1 take, and the vocals are kinda distracting.

Nice rock.

 

[fluffy123]

Cheers!

What would you say about the vocals?

 

[MrBrau1]

The singer has a little trouble staying in tune, and it doesn't really sound like he "means it", as they say. But that makes sense if they were being read as they were sung.

 

[zooperson]

i like it alot. especially Smile. the vocals are good at the end. the band sounds great. The Walls has an Iggy and the Stooges vibe for me, especially the vocals. overall i think its got great potential, i mean, i like it already, the vocals could use some work is all i can say. what are you all called?

 

[fluffy123]

Haven't really got a name yet, we're just throwing a couple of ideas around at the moment. A theory I like is to be named after a phrase, lyric or song...something like that would be cool.

 

[zooperson]

cool. well, keep us posted ok. i think you guys are really good.